Elderly men sit on the benches that surround the small neat garden in the center of the quiet, car free square. To one side of the garden there are tables under low pine trees, where a few men leisurely play cards or chess.
He looks in the opposite direction at the playground on the other side of the garden but there are no children playing. While he waits for his wife to come back from the little souvenir store she stopped at, on the way to the square, he sits and watches the men play.
There is something odd about the place but he can’t quite figure out what it is. He thinks it’s strange that although he has been sitting here for a while, he hasn’t seen any children or women yet. He realizes that, in fact, he hasn’t seen anyone other than old men since he arrived in the square.
The elderly men appear calm and relaxed as if they have no care in the world. They seem happy.
As he looks at his watch he sees that it is past 6pm. He has been sitting here for more than four hours – how did all this time go by without him noticing it? And where is his wife?
Even though he has no idea what has happened to his wife, he feels an overwhelming sense of peace. He leans back against the bench and continues watching the players …
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This was written for the Tritecta weekly, one-word prompt. This week’s word is:
APPEAR
1a : to be or come in sight <the sun appears on the horizon>
b : to show up <appears promptly at eight each day>
2: to come formally before an authoritative body <must appear in court today>
3: to have an outward aspect : seem <appears happy enough>
ooh, I like it! you really paint the scene…..
best,
MOV
Thank you for your comment MOV.
Lovely description of the scene!! Love parks and playgrounds that supply chess tables. Love sitting on a bench watching the people sit around playing chess, it always looks so peacefull. So timeless.
I love doing that too Janaline. Thank you for your comment.
What a peaceful yet menacing picture you’ve painted here. A great take on the prompt.
Thanks for your comment Mike, that’s exactly what I was going for.
I love the scene you’ve portrayed here. But I want to know the rest of the story now!
Ah, maybe I’ll think of a follow up sometime… Thank you so much for your comment Kelly.
Well written Lena and quite intriguing. Love it and thanks for sharing. 🙂 *hugs*
Thank you for your kind comment Sonel. *hugs*
You are very welcome hon. 🙂
Intriguing. As if time stood still. Great description of the happy men at their games. I like the strangeness that comes through. He feels no panic. I hope you continue it.
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Steph.
I love the slow, dreamy pace to this piece. I’m hoping that this is what old age feels like. An earned apathy of sorts. Thanks for linking up.
Yes, it would be quite nice if it was like that. Thanks for your comment.
That’s a strange predicament. Still, he seems content (:
Going with the (slow) flow 😉 Thanks for your comment.
What a surreal setting! I like the odd but peaceful feeling of the story. I can’t help but think when word gets out about this “male only” hangout, it’ll be so crowded that they can’t find a spot on a park bench anymore 🙂
Thank you so much for your comment, Janna. You had me in stitches with the idea of this ‘male only’ hangout getting crowed when word gets out 😀
Enjoyed the placid place, it sure is a different take 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Feels like the senility I’m headed for… hahaha Terrific atmosphere.
Hehe, that’s funny. Thank you for your comment, Kymmin.
What a beautiful piece of writing, I feel drawn into that dappled shade and smoothly slowed down, really nice atmosphere you created with your words……and I want to know where on earth she got to!
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